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I recently had a wonderful holiday in Crete.^{with my friends} 1 I went with my friends. When we arrived we saw a bus. 2 The bus was waiting to take us to our hotel. The hotel was nice with good views. 3 The views were of the sea. The location was also very good. 4 There was lots to do nearby. There are lots of Minoan sites. 5 You can visit them. It's a lovely island. 6 It has beautiful beaches. We spent our time sightseeing, lying on the beach and walking. Actually, it was the walking that I liked best. We did one amazing walk. 7 It was through the Samarian Gorge. It took all day, but was well worth it. We saw a snake. 8 The snake was curled up on a rock. And lots of lizards and birds. We got really hot and were very tired when we arrived at the beach at the end of the long walk. It was great to see the sea. 9 It was sparkling in the sun. We ran into the water to cool down. It was the best holiday ever.

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I recently had a holiday in Crete with my friends. When we arrived we saw a bus waiting to take us to our hotel. The hotel was nice with good views of the sea. The location was also very good with lots to do nearby. There are lots of Minoan sites to visit. It's a lovely island with beautiful beaches. We spent our time sightseeing, lying on the beach and walking, Actually, it was the walking that I liked best. We did one amazing walk through the Samarian Gorge. It took all day, but was well worth it. We saw snake curled up on a rock. And lots of lizards and birds. We got really hot and were very tired when we arrived at the beach at the end of the long walk. It was great to see the sea sparkling in the sun.  We ran into the water to cool down. It was the best holiday ever.